The introduction of who the basic is a bit too long. The audience might get distracted. However the font and the colours match the theme, the red and black make it look sinister.
•The shots you used are very good as you used the tilt shot to show the location of the house and the pan shot to see the actors is a good way to introduce them.
The point of view shot where the camera hides behind makes it seem like someone is there which adds to the mystery so it is helpful to make the mystery linger on.
Furthermore the bird’s eye view you used to show the actors on the stairs is good as it helps us see from a bottom point of view.
The tilt shot of the house is used to establish the setting and panning shot to get everything in shot e.g. TV, PS3, Toys… This gave the scene a sense of realism.
I see where you are coming from however it was meant to be like this as it creates tension. I also had to follow the brief which was someone walking across a room.
Lastly the close up of Liam right at the end ties the film together as it shows his facial expression and that is a good end to a short clip. Overall very well done you have made improvements from your preliminary to your main as you used more shots and more techniques.
This is right as I wanted to show two different shots, their back and their front. This showed their facial expressions as well as their body language.
This was done on purpose as it wanted to leave a cliff hanger at the end for the audiences imagination.
Thank you, this was done deliberately as it was a thriller about something being in the house.
